his week for writing we are focusing on speech writing.Today in our writing lesson we learnt about speech presentations and the structure of a speech.We also brainstormed different topics for speech writing this week.I have decided to write a speech about Best Friends because if you don't have a bestfriend you would be a very lonely person and your best friend is always there for you and your friend is always helping you for something you need and it is friendship.
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui Syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Monday, 28 May 2012
Friday, 18 May 2012
Character Description Ms Tortoise
Today I read a story about animal court this story is a play. We are practicing our presentation skills as this will help us prepare for our movie making project next week. The character I play in the story is Ms Tortoise, she is pretty, she has short silky black hair and has a red ribbon in her hair it suited her hair.She has sparkly black eyes.
She has green skin, her skin is like soft leaves from a tree.She has a strong,bulky shell on her back there are some twirly things on her shell that look like koru’s.
Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Thursday, 29 March 2012
The Haunted House On Maple Street
Seventy years ago there lived three enchanted sisters.Their lovely names were Alexis, Amber and Christina. They smelled like sweet roses. They were beautiful like nature.They had moved to Maple Street in New Zealand .One night Alexis woke up, she was thirsty. She looked around and saw a ghost! The ghost tried to frighten her. The ghost cried,’’In five more days ghosts will push this house so that the dead ghosts will be ALIVE!!!’’.When the ghost had finished talking, Alexis grabbed the vacuum and vacuumed up the ghost.
Later on that week, there was ghosts flying around the house. They were scaring Alexis so she went outside to see what was going on. She was scared going out at night time. She could hear a sudden noise it was coming from under the house. She was horribly scared, she ran into the house to call her family. They were too late to get out but not Alexis. She was frightened but then she was sad for along time.
She heard a sudden noise coming from the sky then she yelled,’’HOME!!!” She could see it floating down to the ground. She found her family and she was glad to have her family back. The ghosts had tried to take her family away from her.
After a few months they happily went to Australia to live there forever where there are no ghosts but lots of Kangaroos.
Thursday, 22 March 2012
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