This is my DLO to show everyone who doesn't know how to count up to 10 in Samoan. I created it because it is Samoan week where everyone in my country, New Zealand, has to learn how to speak Samoan. Some weeks we have other polynesian cultures we speak because our counrty is known for having the most Islanders and because we are a pasific country.
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui Syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Friday 29 May 2015
Thursday 28 May 2015
Auckland Museum Trip
This is my google presentation about my Auckland Musuem Trip we had for our inquiry topic which is Myths and Legends. It includes DLO's and reflections from our memories of what we did there.
Athena
This is my DLO about a god/goddess that sticked out to me on the Auckland Mueseum Trip the senior syndicate went on. The god/goddess that stood out to me was Athena, the Greek goddess of wisdom and skill. This includes facts about Athena and why she is my favourite.
Blog Commenting Task
This is my google presentation about my task for blog commenting. It shows who I sent it to and my opinion on their post and how to post comments on their blogs.
Writing Sample For The Pools
This is my writing sample I did to practice for my actual writing assestment. I used the TREE model to design my paragraphs and sentences.
Name: Tiere Date: 18/02/15
Hints
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Main Ideas
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Extra Details
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Title
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Remember:
HOOK YOUR AUDIENCE IN!
You could... use dialogue, use a sound effect, describe a character’s thoughts or feelings
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Party Splash!
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Reveal
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Reveal your recount!
Who was there? Where were you? When was it? Why did it happen? How did you get there?
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As soon as I walked through the door of my class everyone was talking about how we as a school, Tamaki Primary School, were going on a trip to YMCA Panmure Lagoon Pools where the fun was going to begin but first it all happened to be at school. We, Room 10 Year 8’s, buddied up with Room 5 then we took our buddies to the bus so we could sit together with our peers. During the bus ride there were conversations roaming everywhere between friends.
Little kids smiles were uplifting but their faces were curious. We had little conversations with them just to get to know them better then we arrived with welcoming smiles on our faces and screams of excitement but some people were silent as a book and just totally blank. This all happened because it was a school trip and the main highlight of this trip was to have fun as a school.
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2-3 Paragraphs
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Events
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Tell us your story
What happened? There may be 4-5 events in your story.
Remember:
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Instructions and rules were given out by lifeguards and teachers who were responsible for our water safety and I thought that all these instructions and rules were educational and so we were learning and having fun at the same time. We all had to listen carefully to know how we could be safe in the water and outside of the water. Already you could smell the chlorine fussing in the air, you could feel the shady breeze shivering on your skin, you could hear nature calling to you like the birds shouting, the trees waving and the splashes by the pool and you could taste the embrace of salt water.
Then we had a duathlon in our teams which we were organised in by leaders. When we ran we all had disgusted faces on because of the disgusting smell of the basin it had, leaving a stench of salt lingering in my mouth and nose. I could see birds being statuesque on the tree and trees waving above my head. As soon as we got back all I could hear was stomache earthquakes so we had morning tea with our friends by the time we came back.
When it was free time me and my friends went up the stairs of the hydra slide where there was a queue waiting for us. I heard ferocious screams following the next person and the next and the next and the next until all the people were gone but it was never ending. It was pitch black as soon as I stared in the face of darkness itself. I went in but I was too polite to scream so I didn’t but I laughed because it was funny but everyone else screamed their heads off and it was very exotic like entering a dark slide with water.
As soon as free time finished we all were tired but then we were energetic as soon as we got to know our next activity which was the mini water park. Students reaction was funny but it was all about having fun. We all roamed the water park being cheeky to water which was hilarious concerning talking to water.
It was lunchtime and everyone was provided with a sausage sizzle and ice blocks. Everyone appreciated lunchtime because of the conversations that were going on and the noise level which was acceptable since it was a whole school trip. We all had funny moments with our friends which were memorable. Then it was time to get changed and go home.
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Ending
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Don’t leave us hanging!
How does this story end?
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The showers were fun but not as fun as the pools, getting changed was all right but not as good as getting ready to swim. Here in the pools would be memories left behind but it would be with us through pictures. The bus was sorta silent since we all missed the pools but we couldn't keep going on about how fun it was and how we were going to miss it as Year 8’s since it was our last year at this wonderful school. Then we arrived at school with dripping hair and tired faces that were red from the sun. I thought it was going to last forever but that didn’t happen which was too bad for me.
We rested and waited until the bell rang and we could be dismissed from school and it took a long time like five minutes. During the five minutes we all just sat there silently because our mouths were too tired to speak so we let our mouths go. Reluctantly the bell rang and we were dismissed from class and home was far away and no one wanted to walk home.
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1-2 Paragraphs
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Aroha's Typical Day
This is my google document about Aroha's Typical Day. I did this with my class for grammarnastics and also marked it off as a class. At the bottom there is an description of my normal day.
Aroha’s typical day
I usually get up at 6 o’clock and have a shower. Then, I go for an early morning jog in the park. After that, I have a big breakfast and I drive my car to work which usually takes me half an hour. I start work at 8am. I eat cheese and crackers at interval. I never have lunch. I finish work at 4 o’clock. I’m always tired when I get home. I usually cook a meal in the evening and then watch TV. I don’t usually go out at night. I go to bed at about 10:30. I always sleep well.
Yesterday was a typical day for Jenny. Write what she did or didn’t do yesterday.
Highlight the verbs in the paragraph above.
Remember to change the verbs in to the past simple tense to answer the questions..
- She got up at 6 o’clock.
- She went for an early morning jog.
- She had a big breakfast.
- She drove her car to work.
- It takes her half and hour to get to work.
- She starts work at 8am.
- She ate cheese and crackers at interval.
- She never had lunch.
- She finished work at 4 o’clock.
- She was tired when she got home.
- She cooked a meal yesterday evening.
- She watched TV.
- She never went out last night.
- She slept well last night.
Create task.
What did you do yesterday? Write a short paragraph. Highlight all the past tense verbs.
I was sick. My left arm was sort of paralyzed and like always I didn’t go to sleep. I took my medication with my breakfast and then I went shopping with my little sister and my dad. I was looking after my youngest sister and I babysitted her since my dad went to pick up my other sister for her to go to the dentist. I was happy to look after my little sister since she was well behaved and we also had a little tea party and she brought her ‘friends’ which was surprisingly funny. Then my sisters returned from school and my older brother. Me and my dad were going to our martial art club. Then I went for a shower as soon as we get home then I went to bed.
Shapes In Samoan
This is my DLO about shapes in samoan and how to say it in Samoan. I did this for an task because it is Samoan Language Week where my country, New Zealand, celebrates polynesian culture's languages.
Hercules Movie Study
This is my google presentation I created with Saili and Lavinia about the movie Hercules. We did a movie study where our teacher created questions for us to answer for remembering the movie. It includes Blooms Taxonomy which is an more advanced way for using critical thinking skills and comprhension skills.
My 13th Labour Creation For Hercules
This is my DLO of my 13th Labour that Hercules could've deafeted. It is my creation and my description about it and also it's name is my best friend Brodie because he reassembles my wonderful creation.
Writing Notes For 5 Senses
This is my D.L.O of my writing notes for my 5 senses I could sense in my piece of writing. It includes synonyns of 5 senses and what I could sense from my perspective.
News Article - Omen? UFO? Sun Halo?
Omen? UFO? Sun Halo?
Today, Thursday the 28th of May, I read about a UFO in New Mexico. Apparently there was a su halo and the residents say its a bad omen while others believe it's a sign for rain. They also say that if you look dierectly at it your eyes will be damaged.
If you would like to read more, click the link below:
Wednesday 27 May 2015
Boy Gives Homeless Man A Blessing
Boy Gives Homeless Man A Blessing
Today, Wednesday the 27th of May, I read about a 5 year old boy named Josiah Duncan who was kind to give money to a homeless man who was sitting at a table with no food or company. He was kind enough to sing a blessing song with the staff and by standers crying, this is an example of how we should be in this world and how we should treat others. If you would like to find out more, click the link below:
Boy Gives Homeless Man A Blessing
Myth Brainstorming Scene
This is my mythical brainstorm scene I did for an task. It is about the beginging of how the world broke apart into countries and who broke it apart.
Myth Brainstorm Scene
Malama Honua Whakatau Experience
This is my google presentatation about my experience from Point England Beach where a boat from Hawaii came. It is about the 5 senses like what I could smell, taste, feel, hear and see and about my experience. I did this presentation with my peers Patosina and Saili
Step It Up!
This is my mini poster of what we should be advertising in our school Tamaki Primary School. We advertise mini goals and how we can be a rolemodel and what things we shoud do this year.
The 12 Labours Of Hercules
This is my DLO about the 12 Labours that Hercules defeated and had victory over each task. This includes a summary at the bottom of how he killed each labour or statergies he did to earn victory.
Hercules - What Makes A Hero
This is my D.L.O about what makes a hero from the movie Hercules. It shows who are the good guys and who are the bad guys and also the inbetweeners, there is also a summary at the bottom.
Thursday 14 May 2015
T Words That Describe My Name
This is my google drawing about T words that describe my name, Tiere. This google drawing includes some names I put together in sentences that includes words that describe me.
Bio Poem
This is my bio poem about myself. It includes my family, what I love, what I hate, my likes/dislikes, my feelings and what I fear and what I'd give. My bio poem is about me and my background life.
The Differences Between a Martyr And A Villian
This is my google drawing about the differences between maytres and villians which I did with my buddy Deandra. They have defintions that describe each differences between them and pictures to show the difference between them.
Heroes In Different Fields
This is my google drawing about different heroes in different fields. Each name in every box represents the field which they are compatable with. In every box are different fields like: Social, political, technology, science, service/military, literature, medicine and sport.
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