The Miracle Fruit

WALT: write a narrative using the T.O.P.S structure.

One bright sunny morning in the Cook Islands when the sun was moving across the sky there were two young attractive girls named Cloe and Jade their eyes are like a sparkly diamond and their hair is long and black like the dark night and they had a blue rose in their hair. They were selling fruit at the beach they could see beautiful palm trees and golden pure sand and the beautiful blue ocean and the silver clouds.Cloe and Jade were very thrilled to sell the fruit they couldn't wait to show their mum and dad how much money they got from the people who paid for the fruit.They like to swim and they love their family and they get paranoid easily so don’t mess with them because they are identical twins.

Then a tourist came and shrieked with anger,’’Eww that’s rotten fruit’’ then he left with a smirk because he was displeased with the girls. Five hours later they were paranoid because there were no one to buy their fruit so  they decided to go home and forget about everything that happened but they did not  go home just yet so they went swimming and chucked away the rotten fruit. The beach was  freezing so then they got out and they went home.

On their way home they went to a friends house when they knocked on the door there was no answer but then they saw fruit trees then they decided to grab some and take them to the market and it was a miracle because they became rich and gave it to the poor because they felt sorry for them so then they halved it and gave it to the parents and the other half for the poor and they were very happy.